The diagram explains the migration of people from Iran, Indonesia, and Russia to a metropolitan city between 2000 and 2025.
The lines graph provides the data of amount
people
moving from rural to urban area
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areas
Urbanization
) at
three Change preposition
in
differences
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different
country
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countries
Iran
, Indonesia, and Rusia
between 2000 and 2025.
Based on Correct your spelling
Russia
this
data, average
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the average
people
who conducted Correct quantifier usage
number of people
urbanization
always increase
every single year. Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
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Indonesia
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Indonesia,
during
2020 until 2025 the forecast acknowledges there is no Change preposition
from
any
increasing Correct quantifier usage
apply
urbanization
.
Nevertheless
, the graph of urbanization
always increases at
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in
Iran
and Rusia
, there Correct your spelling
Russia
is
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are
any
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no
of
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total
number of Change the article
a total
the total
people
who moving for urbanization
. Start
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Starting
on
2000 approximately 15 Change preposition
in
million
people
moving
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moved
for
urban Change preposition
to
area
and predicted ranging 85 Fix the agreement mistake
areas
million
will be moving to metropolitan area
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areas
on
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in
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Russia
Rusia
. Comparing
with Wrong verb form
Compared
Rusia
urbanization
data, 9 million
people
on
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in
Iran
already moving to urban area
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areas
at
2000 and Change preposition
in
forecasting
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apply
million
people
will be conducting urbanization
at
2025. Based on Change preposition
in
this
line chart, urbanization
will be happened
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happen
happened
on
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in
differences
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different
country
every single year until 2025 and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
both
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of
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Iran
and Rusia
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Russia
the
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apply
urbanization
always increasing
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increase
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, area, urbanization, iran, rusia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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