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and regulations meant to be followed by all under any circumstances. Most
believe that for the crimes
by the younsters, their
parents
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who should be held
and
in particular
liable action must be taken
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them. I completely disagree with the
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notion. Counselling the young age
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through various methods,
as well as
teaching the
to
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the signs of a criminal mind will prove
this
.
To begin
with, we are only humans and we make a lot of mistakes.
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the legislature if a
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commits a
crime
he/she will not be sent to
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jail, rather than they are put under strict
for a
amount of time. There is no point in holding
parents
responsible for the deeds of their offspring.
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recently whose main aim is to make these young ones realise the dark world that comes tagged along when they open the doors to the
crime
world.
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the implementation of juvenile rehabilitation
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which
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not hold the law
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with the use of advanced technology portray the multiple reactions there one action could
.
As a
there has been a shocking 35 per cent decline in
crimes nationwide.
Furthermore
, the starting point of any
crime
story begins at home, it can be clearly seen that caretakers specifically impose a great influence on their
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thinking process. Not only
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hold the power to manipulate their mind, but
also
they can sense the criminal growing inside them even before their kids know. As the world is becoming more and more
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parents
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for the ones whose
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have a
history of
unlawful acts.
For example
,
according to
a survey, the
parents
who attended the child intervention workshops were able to recognize the early signs of criminal behaviour which eventually helped them in
them at an early stage.
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the advent of technology and provocating information available on the internet will continue to
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plenty of young minds into
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.
ought to actively intervene when they feel is
. The government of course should impose strict rules for attending rehabilitation workshops for those who are out of
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reach or have already
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acts.