Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Law is a set of

rule

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and regulations meant to be followed by all under any circumstances. Most

poeople

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people

believe that for the crimes

commited

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committed

by the younsters, their

parents

are the

one

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ones

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who should be held

resposible

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responsible

and

in particular

liable action must be taken

upon

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against

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them. I completely disagree with the

above stated

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above-stated

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notion. Counselling the young age

law breakers

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lawbreakers

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through various methods,

as well as

teaching the

gaurdians

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guardians

to

forsee

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foresee

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the signs of a criminal mind will prove

this

.

To begin

with, we are only humans and we make a lot of mistakes.

According

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the legislature if a

children

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child

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commits a

crime

he/she will not be sent to

a

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jail, rather than they are put under strict

obeservation

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observation

for a

breif

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brief

amount of time. There is no point in holding

parents

responsible for the deeds of their offspring.

Along with

this

, a lot of new government agencies have emerged

up

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recently whose main aim is to make these young ones realise the dark world that comes tagged along when they open the doors to the

crime

world.

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,

after

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the implementation of juvenile rehabilitation

programme

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programmes

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which

do

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not hold the law

brakers

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breakers

captive

confined

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and confined

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in a cell but

along

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with the use of advanced technology portray the multiple reactions there one action could

genrate

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generate

.

As a

result

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result,

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there has been a shocking 35 per cent decline in

child commited

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child-committed

crimes nationwide.

Furthermore

, the starting point of any

crime

story begins at home, it can be clearly seen that caretakers specifically impose a great influence on their

childs

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thinking process. Not only

they

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do they

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hold the power to manipulate their mind, but

also

they can sense the criminal growing inside them even before their kids know. As the world is becoming more and more

concious

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conscious

regarding every aspect, there are specific workshops designed for

the

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interested

parents

especially

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for the ones whose

offsprings

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have a

breif

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brief

history of

commiting

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committing

unlawful acts.

For example

,

according to

a survey, the

parents

who attended the child intervention workshops were able to recognize the early signs of criminal behaviour which eventually helped them in

contolling

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controlling

them at an early stage.

To sum up

,

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the advent of technology and provocating information available on the internet will continue to

brain wash

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brainwash

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plenty of young minds into

commiting

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committing

crime

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crimes

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.

Gaurdians

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Guardians

ought to actively intervene when they feel is

neccessary

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necessary

. The government of course should impose strict rules for attending rehabilitation workshops for those who are out of

theirs

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their

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parents

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parents'

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reach or have already

commited

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committed

the

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henious

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heinous

acts.