You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend

Dear Mr.Jim, I hope
this
message finds you well. I am writing
this
to let you know that I am moving from the apartment soon as I am moving to another city. First of all, I would like to thank you for
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giving
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opportunity to live in your apartment for more than two years. I do not want to leave
this
apartment as it is in the centre of
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all
amenties
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amenities
are closer to the house. The transportation is very good in
this
area but unfortunately, from next month I am moving to Mumbai. I got
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job there so that's why I am moving
otherwise
I would never move from the
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and peaceful house.
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last
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two years, I felt that I am living in my own house only because of your good behaviour. I never had any problems
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issues during
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stay, you have always treated me like your family member. So, I am informing you one month prior before I leave as it was written on
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when I signed. I would like to tell you about my friend who is looking for
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place to live in your city. He is a student and will stay for one year
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nice guy. Please let me know if you are okay and I will send you his details. Hope to hear from you Yours faithfully, Sim
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas into separate paragraphs, such as one paragraph for thanking the landlord, and another for introducing your friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your sentences are clear and concise to enhance readability, especially when explaining reasons for moving.
Task Achievement
You addressed all parts of the task, including informing the landlord about your move, expressing gratitude, and suggesting your friend as a future tenant.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for addressing a landlord, showing respect and appreciation.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, suitable for an interpersonal relationship with your landlord.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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