Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative developmen?
These days,
people
think that we must find reusable energy
for preventing a diversity of pollution and for human health. I believe that we should use alternative sources of energy
instead
of fossil fuels
. I will present my views on this
subject and conclude.
To begin
with, a lot of experts argue that we have to look for and use reusable energy
down the road because fossil fuels
will ruin the overall
environment like air and water quality and trigger deforestation in many places by constructing nature to get a number of fossil fuels
. For example
, There were designated areas to protect the biggest nature, especially in North America, however
, people
who wanted to get petroleum in the places established several factories to dig the ground for petroleum. As a result
, the natural regions were developed and destroyed enormously, and most of the natives lost their habitats.
Additionally
, we can not deny that fossil fuels
create plenty of harmful chemical substances unstoppably. Those substances will wipe out the Earth’s circulated system and humans suffer from unpredictable climate changes like a scorching summer. For instance
, the number of people
by severe climate change has been rising consistently, even amount of died elderly people
due to
this
climate change doubled this
year in Korea. Consequently
, utilizing alternative sources of energy
is an inevitable factor for human
In conclusion, I think that we have to struggle to make the right decision like using natural sources and energy
and replacing most of the energy
from fossil fuels
to reusable energy
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