Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative developmen?

These days,
people
think that we must find reusable
energy
for preventing a diversity of pollution and for human health. I believe that we should use alternative sources of
energy
instead
of fossil
fuels
. I will present my views on
this
subject and conclude.
To begin
with, a lot of experts argue that we have to look for and use reusable
energy
down the road because fossil
fuels
will ruin the
overall
environment like air and water quality and trigger deforestation in many places by constructing nature to get a number of fossil
fuels
.
For example
, There were designated areas to protect the biggest nature, especially in North America,
however
,
people
who wanted to get petroleum in the places established several factories to dig the ground for petroleum.
As a result
, the natural regions were developed and destroyed enormously, and most of the natives lost their habitats.
Additionally
, we can not deny that fossil
fuels
create plenty of harmful chemical substances unstoppably. Those substances will wipe out the Earth’s circulated system and humans suffer from unpredictable climate changes like a scorching summer.
For instance
, the number of
people
by severe climate change has been rising consistently, even amount of died elderly
people
due to
this
climate change doubled
this
year in Korea.
Consequently
, utilizing alternative sources of
energy
is an inevitable factor for human In conclusion, I think that we have to struggle to make the right decision like using natural sources and
energy
and replacing most of the
energy
from fossil
fuels
to reusable
energy
.
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