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Are we too dependent on antibiotics? Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#antibiotics
Antibiotics
 in human medicine nowadays are one of the most important, indispensable resources in the
treatment
 of numerous
diseases
 caused by and have saved an uncountable number of lives since they
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 introduced, about a hundred years ago. On the one hand, millions of
antibiotic
 therapies are being prescripted by doctors all over the world on a daily basis regarding the
treatment
 of bacterial infections and
therefor
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 have been lifesaving for an outrageous number of humans since they
have been
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 discovered by a famous scientist from Austria, about a hundred years ago. Since
then
, they
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 used in animals and humans and there is a big discussion
whether
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about whether
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 they are always needed or
there
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whether there
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 is
an
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overtreatment.
Nevertheless
, when it comes to
antibiotic
usage
 in animals, on animal farms
in particular
, to prevent the spread of
diseases
 by feeding them
antibiotics
, may lead to
resistances
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in
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 human
antibiotic
treatment
due to
bacteria
 changing their genetics
for surviving
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 the
antibiotic
treatment
, therefor should be very strict rules for the
usage
 of
antibiotics
 in animals and governments are demanded to invent them.
In addition
, when it comes to human medicine, there are several
diseases
 caused by
bacteria
, that are on their way to
build
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 up more and more
resistances
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resistance
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 because of the inflationary
usage
 of
antibiotics
 which can lead to
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 no
further
 treatments for these
diseases
 when there are no anti-bacterial-therapies left that are able to eradicate
bacteria
 which can lead to serious health issues that humanity will have to face in the future. In conclusion, there should international laws for the
usage
 of
antibiotics
 to prevent the spread of multi-resistant
bacteria
 and humanity can still be able to use them when it comes
serious
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to serious
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 infections
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