You have just read an article in our national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter See which point in the article you agree with. Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guy to her of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to give you my opinion about an article which you have recently published in our national newspaper called "Dawn". Let me explain in more detail. Basically, I do agree with some points which you mentioned about
town
centres in my country. Like all
town
centres are round in shape and have many shops in the surrounding which are same in size.
However
, in my
town
centre
, there is a big sculpture of our founder "Qaid-e-Azam"and there is a bridge which connects the north side of the city to the west side.
This
bridge and
this
sculpture differentiate our
town
centre
from others. Would you kindly like to revisit my
town
centre
with me? If you give me
this
opportunity to me so, I can guide you and clear your some misunderstandings about
this
beautiful
town
centre
. Please let me know. Your's sincerely, Ayman Zai
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task response
Provide a more clear and specific response to the points you agree with in the article.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter, using proper paragraphing.
lexical resource
Use a wider variety of vocabulary to enhance your expression.
grammatical range
Pay closer attention to sentence structure and grammar, especially in areas such as subject-verb agreement and verb tense.
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