Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree o disagree?

It is controversial that a huge amount of funding is being spent on exploring outer

space

whereas

others assume that the governments had better use the cash for enhancing the living conditions on Earth.

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with

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statement

due to

the

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warnings of

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poverty, poor education and other social issues appearing commonly in developing countries. First of all, there is no doubt that in developing countries, lots of social problems are affecting

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living conditions

as a result

of the lack of investment in education and financial projects.

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local government grants are being used wastefully for

space

researches

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instead

of purchasing more essential

equipments

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for education and businesses.

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seen as an ineffective method to develop national economies because those two activities play a vital role in changing

inhabitants

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lifestyles positively, but

also

, they require a sufficient amount of cash,

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from governments and investors to build infrastructure

as well as

refurbishing the school learning areas, to build up trust and atract foreign institutions. Take Singapore as an example, in order to deal with the high proportion of unemployment and poor

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facilities

such

as amenities and financial blocks, the president guided everyone to

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and make use of nearly 85% of funding to improve the living conditions and

also

inspire young pupils to take higher courses.

By contrast

, exploring outer

space

could be partly recognised as a modern way to

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human steps

nowadays

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. It is obvious that in a very short period of time,

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population on Earth must face to face with the lack of food and

space

to lead a nice and comfortable lifestyle.

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order to deal with that problematic issue, millions or even billions of dollars

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being spent to build up

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space

projects and generate state-of-the-art

spacecrafts

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spacecraft

to travel to a new, sustainable planet and

in other words

, to look for a better home for human.

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is because scientists from all over the world can predict and point out the best living standards that can be currently achieved by our modern technology. Take SpaceX as a contextual instance, it is the fact that the company has made profits from developing

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spacecraft

which have

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to transport goods and

plant

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to the nearest planet Moon.

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,

this

process can give opportunities for everyone to settle down

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new place. In conclusion, it can bring various benefits if the governments can ensure that the funding

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for exploring

space

.

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, the

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living standards are still very hard to adapt and we should

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the money to improve and build facilities for significant activities.