Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals think that
money
are
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is
paid
on space to look up for Verb problem
spent
life
and new
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a new
planet
every year. It isn't good and we need to spend that money
on upgrade
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upgrading
standard
of living for Correct article usage
the standard
human
. I totally disagree with Fix the agreement mistake
humans
this
statement. The reason I will throughout in
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apply
this
essay.
On the one hand, we need to find a new life
out there because It like
you find some new Add a missing verb
is like
friend
to have somebody help you something
in your Change preposition
with something
life
. When we find a new life
we can know more about galaxy
or new devices to help Correct article usage
the galaxy
human
have more Fix the agreement mistake
humans
invention
. It helps human Fix the agreement mistake
inventions
life
more modern and convenient. It can help human
find another Fix the agreement mistake
humans
planet
to live because
the earth is too polluted for us to live in the future. So we need to find some new Change preposition
on because
planet
or some new friend
in the galaxy
.
On the other hand
, we can spend there
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their
money
to invent some new device or machine
to help Change the article
the machine
human
reduce Fix the agreement mistake
humans
a
carbon footprint. And we can use Change the word
their
this
money
to help children have more place
to study or play. It Fix the agreement mistake
places
help
human knowledge will improve and we will have more scientist to help human have some new machine or device like Tesla's invention. It will Change the verb form
helps
helpful
for earth to become more green and help human Replace the word
help
life
more simple.
In my opinion, we need to find a new planet
or new friend
in the galaxy
because it is faster than waiting children
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for children
grow
up and become Fix the infinitive
to grow
scientist
and Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
then
It will take we
sixty or seventy years to Correct pronoun usage
us
scientist
invent something helpful for Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
human
. And Fix the agreement mistake
humans
the
global warming Correct article usage
apply
become more
faster because some people want to become rich guy, so we need to move to another Wrong verb form
is becoming
planet
to live fast.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with this
statement because I like galaxy
and I want to know more about Fix the agreement mistake
galaxies
galaxy
. Fix the agreement mistake
galaxies
Moreover
I want to live Add a comma
Moreover,
in
another Change preposition
on
planet
with my family and meet some new friend
from Fix the agreement mistake
friends
galaxy
.Add an article
the galaxy
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