The bar chart shows the percentage of total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.
The bar chart compares the proportion of total words of people in 4 cities (India,
China
, the USA, and Japan) for different
three
years
(1950,2003, and 2050)
Overall
, we can see the
percentage
population in
China
highest in 1950 and 2002
while
, in 2050 the
percentage
is decreased.
In contrast
, between 1950 and 2002
China
increased throughout the whole time frame.
Furthermore
, in 1950 the
percentage
in
China
arrived at above 20%
whereas
in 2002 arrived at 20%.
Although
China
has the highest number in two
years
(1950,2002), in 2050 the
percentage
will drop to 10%.
On the other hand
, in India, there was a dramatic increase in
three
years
. The proportion in
three
years
is around 15% to under 20 %. On the opposite, in the USA and Japan, there was the lowest
percentage
from
China
and India. In the USA the highest
percentage
arrived in 1950 and reached over 5% but in 2002 and 2050 remained stable at 5%.
The
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Japan was
lowest
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the lowest
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country in
three
years
was decreased, the
percentage
arrived in
three
years
under 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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