1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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Dear John, I hope

this

letter finds you and your family well. Since we haven't seen each other for more than two years and I do really miss you, I'm writing to you with a special suggestion for a holiday trip to the north.

Last

week, I decided to buy two plane tickets for me and my brother to travel to the north. I planned everything including hotel rooms for us to stay there for three days

as well as

reserving seats on a recreational boat which costs 100 dollars for each person.

however

, unfortunately, my brother won't be able to come with me because of his job. Apparently, a structural issue has caused their company to cease to operate properly and they have to work double time to fix it immediately. So, I thought that would be great if you could come with me

instead

of my brother. It's going to be so much fun since we get the chance to see each other again. I can't wait to see you soon Best Wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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