1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.
Dear John,
I hope
this
letter finds you and your family well. Since we haven't seen each other for more than two years and I do really miss you, I'm writing to you with a special suggestion for a holiday trip to the north.
Last
week, I decided to buy two plane tickets for me and my brother to travel to the north. I planned everything including hotel rooms for us to stay there for three days as well as
reserving seats on a recreational boat which costs 100 dollars for each person.
however
, unfortunately, my brother won't be able to come with me because of his job. Apparently, a structural issue has caused their company to cease to operate properly and they have to work double time to fix it immediately.
So, I thought that would be great if you could come with me instead
of my brother. It's going to be so much fun since we get the chance to see each other again.
I can't wait to see you soon
Best Wishes,Submitted by greatsoloist on
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