1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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Dear John, I hope

this

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letter finds you and your family well. Since we haven't seen each other for more than two years and I do really miss you, I'm writing to you with a special suggestion for a holiday trip to the north.

Last

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week, I decided to buy two plane tickets for me and my brother to travel to the north. I planned everything including hotel rooms for us to stay there for three days

as well as

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reserving seats on a recreational boat which costs 100 dollars for each person.

however

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, unfortunately, my brother won't be able to come with me because of his job. Apparently, a structural issue has caused their company to cease to operate properly and they have to work double time to fix it immediately. So, I thought that would be great if you could come with me

instead

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of my brother. It's going to be so much fun since we get the chance to see each other again. I can't wait to see you soon Best Wishes,

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Coherence and Cohesion

Provide more specific details about the vacation plan.

Lexical Resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.

Grammatical Range

Try to use more complex sentence structures for better grammatical range.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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