The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of money needed to purchase
bananas
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in four countries from 1996 to 2004.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Japan and Germany experienced an upward trend.
While
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both countries faced a fluctuating price in a given
period
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, the remaining countries were almost stable in
this
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range of time.
Firstly
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, it was noticeable that there was an unstable price movement of
bananas
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from Japan and Germany. At the beginning of the
period
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, the price of
bananas
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in Japan was $2 per kilogram and ended up with $2.5.
Likewise
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, the cost of German
bananas
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moved from $1.5 to approximately $1.75 in 2004.
Although
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there was a slight increase in
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bananas
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banana
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expenses in the USA between 1996 and 1998,
this
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figure was stable at around $1.25 per kilogram until the end of the
period
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.
While
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France had an unstable value from 1996 to 2003,
this
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number was equal to the beginning of the
period
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with $2 per kilogram.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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