The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two given maps showcase the recent developments that were done towards a particular university campus. The two images were taken ten years apart, one being from 2010 and the other from 2020. At a glance, there have not been that much of changes when it comes to the number of
buildings
. Comparing the layout between 2010 and 2020, both periods have
buildings
surrounding a lake. In 2010, there were six
buildings
and a lawn and sitting area surrounding the aforementioned lake. When we are to look at 2020, only five
buildings
are present in the area.
Along with
that, the sitting area that encircles the lake is nowhere to be found. It is safe to say that the
buildings
in 2020 are much higher than those in 2010. Several
buildings
have
also
changed in function.
For example
, the university office from 2010 has been converted
to
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into
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a science building.
This
is quite a massive change as the old science and art building from 2010 is now solely used for the arts program. The shops and
restaurant
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restaurants
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that were once independently standing in 2010 are now part of a student facilities complex. In their previous place now stands a student accommodation building.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words buildings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • campus
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • sustainable
  • accessibility
  • layout
  • pedestrian zones
  • transportation routes
  • parking facilities
  • greenery
  • sports center
  • lecture halls
  • demolition
  • modernize
  • expansion
  • enhancement
  • comprehensive development
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