The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the development which took place in the
park
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between 1980 and now.
Overall
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a natural
area
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to a more recreational
park
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. In the year 1980, the
park
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was a much greener
area
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with a large number of trees and flowers.
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, during the next 43 years, the
park
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saw a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that the majority of the trees in the northeast
area
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were chopped down and converted into a recreational garden, complete with all facilities to support group events,
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as camping or barbecue parties.
Moreover
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, the flowers in the southwest
area
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were not treated well and turned into bushes.
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, the flowers in the southeast
area
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were replaced by a new playground.
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, there were no significant changes in the small space near the gate. The pond still remains the same,
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the benches.
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, one bench was added and there are four benches in that space right now.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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