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The three pie chart illustrates
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the extend
extend
granted at the National University for a period Replace the word
extent
twenty
years.
There is a clear number of graduates in computer science a rise every ten years compared to Change preposition
of twenty
Law
granted.
Although
those who graduated in Computer Science and law
in 1990 were equal, the development of the two was opposite
.Correct article usage
the opposite
According to
the results of the two thousandth year, the business and law
are equaling to medicine
of 30% and the sum of the three exceeded only just over a quarter.For twenty years, the lowest indicator was the Add an article
the medicine
a medicine
law
and it was a modest fifteen per cent. In 2010, computer science was almost half nearly the full percent
higher than the other three areas.Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
the initial and final rate of medicine was just over a quarter.Add a comma
Furthermore,
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