The given chart represents the number of tavellers using three vital airports in New York city among 1995 and 2000.
The given chart illustrates the number of tourists using three major airports in New York City over the period from 1995 to 2000.
Overall
,LaGuardia and Newark airport
were gaining Fix the agreement mistake
airports
visitors
year
by year
, while
John F.Kennedy
fluctuated wildly over the given period.
In the beginning, LaGuardia was the most popular Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
airport
with passability
of approximately 35 Correct article usage
a passability
million
people per year
.In comparison, Newark airport
was the least popular in 1995 with passability
of almost 15 Correct article usage
a passability
million
people per year
.This
two Correct determiner usage
These
airports
stats stayed the same in 2000. Change noun form
airports'
However
, airport
visitors
of LaGuardia doubled and hit nearly 70 million
people per year
in 2000, whilst Newark airport
was slightly under 45 million
visitors
per year
.
John F.Kennedy
Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
airport
oscillated.There was a sharp rise between 1996 and 1997,in 1997 there Capitalize word
Airport
was
10 Change the verb form
were
million
more visitors
,however
,in 1998 there was a wild fall.Nonetheless
,in 2000, John F.Kennedy
Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
airport
ended up being the second most popular Capitalize word
Airport
airport
among this
three.Correct determiner usage
these
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