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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph and bar chart show the typical highest and lowest
temperatures
 per day over a
month
 period
as well as
 the mean of
days
 on each
month
 having
rainfall
 in
Brisbane
 and
Canberra
.
Overall
,
Brisbane
 is hotter during the
year
 than
Canberra
 with more intensity of
rainfall
 between the end of the
year
 and the following mid-
year
. In terms of maximum
temperatures
,
Brisbane
 and
Canberra
 have about equal numbers at around 27.5
degrees
 Celcius at the beginning of the
year
.
In contrast
, the minimum
temperature
 of
Brisbane
 in January stood at just above 20
degrees
 Celcius compared to
Canberra
 with a lower
temperature
 of approximately 12.5
degrees
. In February,
Brisbane
's
temperature
 reached a peak of 30
degrees
,
while
 the
temperature
 in
Canberra
 levelled off at the same point as the previous
month
.
Consequently
, both cities face a gradual decline in their
temperatures
 to approximately 22.5
degrees
 Celcius
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the highest
temperatures
 in
Brisbane
 and almost zero in
Canberra
 during July.
Finally
, the
temperature
 of
Canberra
 and
Brisbane
 bounces back to a level
that is
 nearly equal to the start point.
On the other hand
, the daily
rainfall
 in
Brisbane
 per 4-week period is higher than in
Canberra
 from November until May of the next
year
 with a tip of 14
days
 monthly in February and March.
In addition
,
Canberra
's
rainfall
 is more likely to occur in mid-
year
 with a slighter number of
days
 at 10. The lowest
rainfall
days
 in a
month
 for both municipalities lie at 7
days
.
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