Government of many countries had to impose a lockdown to control the Coronavirus pandemic. What were the advantages and disadvantages of this lockdown. Give example from your own experience.
Coronavirus
had been
considered to be a deadly disease and impacted the whole world with millions of deaths. Wrong verb form
is
Lockdown
has been implemented by the Government in various countries in order to stop the spread of the virus. Add an article
The lockdown
A lockdown
This
decision had a few advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraph.
After the government restricted the people not to step out of their households. The first advantage was that it brought the family members closer. Due to
the busy life schedules with office hours, adults could not spend their time with their families. After the lockdown
, they were able to spend quality time together with
kids and family members and had their lives back to their culture
form. Replace the word
cultural
Apart from
this
, organisations had
developed the term called "work from home"culture. And they were able to execute it successfully. Wrong verb form
have
In addition
to this
, organsiations
were able to save up their money from office expenses Correct your spelling
organisations
for
example : office rent, electricity chargers and other expenses incurred by the firm.
Add the comma(s)
, for
Secondly
, the disadvantage due
to Change preposition
apply
this
was it affected people those
who Correct pronoun usage
apply
are
working on daily wages. Wrong verb form
were
Laboures
who were earning money from daily wages Correct your spelling
Labourers
was
affected as they Change the verb form
were
cannot
go out after the Wrong verb form
could not
lockdown
. Many poor household people suffered alot
as they could not earn money to live their lives for food and water. As the Correct your spelling
a lot
lockdown
implemented
to control the Add a missing verb
was implemented
pandemic
it affected school Add a comma
pandemic,
childrens
as they were not able to study in their classroom. Their classes Correct your spelling
children
was
conducted Change the verb form
were
through
online in certain apps Change preposition
apply
for
example, Google Add the comma(s)
, for
meet
, Zoom and Microsoft Capitalize word
Meet
teams
. Capitalize word
Teams
This
affected their pace of study in a classroom based
study. Attending classes Add a hyphen
classroom-based
through
online for long hours Change preposition
apply
childrens
resulted Correct your spelling
children
children's
with
health issues like Change preposition
in
Migraine
, Eye pain and Body aches as they Fix the agreement mistake
Migraines
were sitting
still in front of their mobile phones,Wrong verb form
sit
Pc's
and Laptops.
Change noun form
PCs
To conclude
this
, the pandemic affected globally and it also
brought certain changes in their daily lives after the lockdown
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