Government of many countries had to impose a lockdown to control the Coronavirus pandemic. What were the advantages and disadvantages of this lockdown. Give example from your own experience.

Coronavirus
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considered to be a deadly disease and impacted the whole world with millions of deaths.
Lockdown
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The lockdown
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has been implemented by the Government in various countries in order to stop the spread of the virus.
This
decision had a few advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraph. After the government restricted the people not to step out of their households. The first advantage was that it brought the family members closer.
Due to
the busy life schedules with office hours, adults could not spend their time with their families. After the
lockdown
, they were able to spend quality time
together with
kids and family members and had their lives back to their
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form.
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this
, organisations
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developed the term called "work from home"culture. And they were able to execute it successfully.
In addition
to
this
,
organsiations
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organisations
were able to save up their money from office expenses
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example : office rent, electricity chargers and other expenses incurred by the firm.
Secondly
, the disadvantage
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to
this
was it affected people
those
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who
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working on daily wages.
Laboures
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Labourers
who were earning money from daily wages
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affected as they
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go out after the
lockdown
. Many poor household people suffered
alot
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a lot
as they could not earn money to live their lives for food and water. As the
lockdown
implemented
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to control the
pandemic
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it affected school
childrens
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children
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as they were not able to study in their classroom. Their classes
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conducted
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online in certain apps
for
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example, Google
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, Zoom and Microsoft
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.
This
affected their pace of study in a
classroom based
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study. Attending classes
through
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online for long hours
childrens
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children
children's
resulted
with
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health issues like
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, Eye pain and Body aches as they
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still in front of their mobile phones,
Pc's
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and Laptops.
To conclude
this
, the pandemic affected globally and it
also
brought certain changes in their daily lives after the
lockdown
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pandemic
  • impose
  • lockdown
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • reduction
  • spread
  • virus
  • save lives
  • overwhelmed
  • healthcare systems
  • develop
  • distribute
  • vaccines
  • individual
  • family
  • well-being
  • pollution
  • environmental benefits
  • awareness
  • cooperation
  • communities
  • negative impact
  • economy
  • businesses
  • loss of employment
  • financial instability
  • mental health issues
  • disruption
  • education
  • social isolation
  • loneliness
  • rise
  • domestic violence cases
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