Some people believe that there should b fixed punishments for each type of crome. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion
When it comes to
crime
judgment, while
some people think that fixed punishments should be implemented regardless of Correct word choice
apply
crime
. Others believed that individual circumstances and motivation should Add an article
the crime
also
be addressed. Although
it can be understanded
that for some people Correct your spelling
understood
crime
is already outrageous, seeking strict punishments is understandable. However
, that would result in unfairness in some cases. Hence
this
essay will explain the reasons for choosing the less strict judgement.
To begin
with, it is inevitable that the public's attitudes towards criminals have not always been positive. Especially for the victim who suffers the most, so ethically speaking their hatred is bursting combined with their convetional
attitude, and unforgiveness is nowhere to be seen. Correct your spelling
conventional
unconventional
Thus
whenever seeking for
punishment, victims do not have any permission in the process but forgive the criminal. Change preposition
apply
For example
, there have been countless surveys on what are their opinions if there is a law that allows those who won the courts decide
the outcome for the criminals . And unsurprisingly, the vast Fix the infinitive
to decide
majorites
chose they agree.
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majority
On the other hand
, in some cases, it might be unfair for some people. Mistakes can happen anytime even in the court system. For instance
, there has been a famous story about a guy who was
falsely claimed that he was a serial killer because of the similarity in his look. The story Unnecessary verb
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had
ended with his death penalty before the culprit was shortly caught. Unnecessary verb
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Hence
it is important to judge the crime
in every aspect from the criminal also
, so that the outcome would not be biased.
In conclusion, when one commit
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commits
crime
, although
it is unethical, however
, throughly
judgements Correct your spelling
thoroughly
such
as taking int
account motivation Correct your spelling
into
as well as
surrounding factors are important. So that the result would be fair for both sides.Submitted by maituanorange on
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