You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter - describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight - explain how missing your flight affected you - make it clear what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to lodge a formal complaint about the error

was

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made by one of your JFK airport employees. The situation has made a great

inconvience

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inconvenience

to me and

thworted

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thwarted

my plans. I had a flight on the 22nd of March, two days ago. When I arrived at the airport, one of your

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decided to help with my hand luggage, because I had a

lot

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things to lug. He conveyed me to my

gate way

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and helped to find the plane. I

have

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been sitting inside the empty plane for 35 minutes before I found out that it

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wrong plane. To my great chagrin

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tryed

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tried

to find the right aircraft I missed my flight and lost any chances to attend my biology conference in Los Angeles. It was an extremely important event for me

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because I was invited to open the conference and give a talk. I was forced to connect online and

recived

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received

receive

a lot of

regative

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negative

feedback from my fellows.

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the fact that I have been a platinum member of your

airlines

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over the

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ten years, I really hope for compensation. I have a

vocation

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with my family next month in Hawaii and want to ask you about one-way complementary tickets for me and my family. I look forward to receiving your response

and

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soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Michael Fly

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coherence cohesion

Provide more details and explanation about the incident at the airport.

task achievement

Clearly state how missing the flight affected your plans and provide specific examples.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary and more precise language.

grammatical range

Pay attention to verb tense consistency and improve sentence structure.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

235 words

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