You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter - describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight - explain how missing your flight affected you - make it clear what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to lodge a formal complaint about the error

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made by one of your JFK airport employees. The situation has made a great

inconvience

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inconvenience

to me and

thworted

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thwarted

my plans. I had a flight on the 22nd of March, two days ago. When I arrived at the airport, one of your

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decided to help with my hand luggage, because I had a

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things to lug. He conveyed me to my

gate way

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and helped to find the plane. I

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been sitting inside the empty plane for 35 minutes before I found out that it

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wrong plane. To my great chagrin

while

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to find the right aircraft I missed my flight and lost any chances to attend my biology conference in Los Angeles. It was an extremely important event for me

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because I was invited to open the conference and give a talk. I was forced to connect online and

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received

receive

a lot of

regative

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negative

feedback from my fellows.

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the fact that I have been a platinum member of your

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over the

last

ten years, I really hope for compensation. I have a

vocation

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with my family next month in Hawaii and want to ask you about one-way complementary tickets for me and my family. I look forward to receiving your response

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soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Michael Fly

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coherence cohesion

Provide more details and explanation about the incident at the airport.

task achievement

Clearly state how missing the flight affected your plans and provide specific examples.

lexical resource

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grammatical range

Pay attention to verb tense consistency and improve sentence structure.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

235 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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