Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many people agree that

students

should not be allowed to

use

their mobile

phone

during the

study

time. Others,

however

, think that banning the

phone

from

students

is unnecessary. I personally believe that phones

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a useful tool to help their

study

, yet it is generally true that

students

often lose their concentration because of mobile

phone

. With the current advanced technology, especially

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,

relying

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a traditional method to teach in the classroom will no longer

effective

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for the

students

. Pupils can easily get bored and fall asleep because the teacher only

use

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a textbook or a boring PowerPoint material. Involving the

students

directly in the science experiments will be more interesting for the

students

.

This

can be done using a mobile

phone

;

students

can install an application called "Phyphox"

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their phones which has various tools and sensors for the experiments' activity.

While

smartphone

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can help pupils in their learning

activity

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, there are more

situation

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where

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students

misusing

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their

phone

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instead

of using

it

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properly. In many cases, they do not give their attention to their teacher.

Instead

, they are busy with their

phone

, whether to play a game or open their social media. In my opinion, the school should not ban

smartphone

from

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students

because

phone

has many benefits

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students

theirself

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.

For instance

, a student may need to

use

a

smartphone

to call their parents to pick up them after school. Giving a proper restriction seems like a better option

instead

of fully banning the

phone

. In conclusion, allowing

students

to

use

their

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the school day can help the teacher in making more interactive

study

.

However

, most

of

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students

have misused their

phone

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instead

of using

it

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for

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study

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. Making some limitations in using mobile

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may be a good solution to unify the

proponent

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proponents

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and

opponent

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opponents

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of

this

topic.