The diagram below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

The diagram below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm

climates.
The diagram displays concepts of housing designs in tropical and temperate
weathers
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.
Overall
in the temperate climate, the building materials, roofing and window designs are equipped for insulation and storage of
heat
while
during the day in the warmer climate, the opposite is true . As for
night time
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in tropical
climates
,
windows
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design is essential. Buildings in
the
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cool
climates
are designed with
high angled
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roofing to conserve
heat
but those in
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warm
climates
are left overhanging as shade during the day to obstruct sunlight and made from reflective material to bounce off every
heat
that strikes. As it concerns the windows, during the day in a hot atmosphere,it is closed but left open at night .
However
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the windows in the cooler weather conditions are in the plane of
angle
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of reflection of sunlight . The materials used for the structural designs are
heat trapping
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and insulating as in winter,houses in the Northern
hemisphere
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require
this
, as for the homes in warmer
climates
, the construction materials provide external insulation and reflection.
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