You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

Dear Durdona, I am writing to find out how you are. We have not met with you for a long time. I was worried about you
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when I heard that you have problems. Thanks to God I had a chance to see you in the near future. My university
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a hike in the mountains for a week, close to your city Tomsk.
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, you told me about
this
city. It was incredible,
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I think the trip will be very entertaining. There is a hotel
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the mountains called Burun. We will stay there for five days and we will
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spend the other two days in the city. The hotel is located in the middle of the mountain where you can see all the miles on each side. After the trip I will visit you or if you want you can join us. You've been living here for three years now and you know a lot of entertaining places where we can have fun like before. If you remember you told me about the bar
that is
close to your house, we can visit
this
bar as soon as I see you. Yours sincerely, Firuza
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to inform you that
  • I am excited to announce that
  • I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
  • I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
  • I have booked a room at a hotel called
  • I will be staying in the town from
  • I am wondering if you could recommend any
  • fun activities
  • entertainment options
  • popular places to visit
  • restaurants
  • bars
  • clubs
  • concert venues
  • I am particularly interested in
  • local live music performances
  • cultural events
  • art galleries
  • theater shows
  • I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
  • Thank you in advance for your help
  • I am looking forward to hearing from you
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