You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.
Dear Durdona,
I am writing to find out how you are. We have not met with you for a long time. I was worried about you
,
when I heard that you have problems. Thanks to God I had a chance to see you in the near future. My university Remove the comma
apply
is
Verb problem
has
arrange
a hike in the mountains for a week, close to your city Tomsk. Wrong verb form
arranged
Furthermore
, you told me about this
city. It was incredible, therefore
I think the trip will be very entertaining.
There is a hotel on
the mountains called Burun. We will stay there for five days and we will Change preposition
in
also
spend the other two days in the city. The hotel is located in the middle of the mountain where you can see all the miles on each side.
After the trip I will visit you or if you want you can join us. You've been living here for three years now and you know a lot of entertaining places where we can have fun like before. If you remember you told me about the bar that is
close to your house, we can visit this
bar as soon as I see you.
Yours sincerely,
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