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three areas was changed between 2003 and 2012 in New Port. Looking from an

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the rate of robbery has been minimal over the span of 9 years.

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reached a maximum of about 3700 in 2004,

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it began to decline, hitting a low of approximately 1250 in 2008 in New Port. As for the

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incidents was 2900 in 2004,

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2006 it has been rising, reaching a peak of 2750 in 2012. As can

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minimal in all years in comparison with other crimes. It was quite steady, starting with 500 incidents in 2003 and ending with about 700 in 2012.