The map below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The map illustrates changes that occurred in the town of Willington in the years 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the village became more residential and commercial including new homes
, roads, a bridge, Correct word choice
and shops
shops
. villages, sports Correct word choice
and shops
field
, and expanded areas for Fix the agreement mistake
fields
wetland
for birds. Fix the agreement mistake
wetlands
In addition
, the river
remained unchanged.
Looking at the map in more detail, there were only 100 homes
in Willington and the west was occupied by farms in 1780. The river
ran from north to south along the long side of the town, a feature that was unaltered by 2000. In the year 1860, some farms had been removed to give way to a road leading from the river
to a village that had doubled in size (200 homes
) in the North. Moreover
, there was also
the appearance of a bridge over the river
.
In 2000, the number of homes
had a significantly
rise, to 500 Change the adverb
significant
homes
and the farm and forest were completely destroyed. They were replaced by two schools, three sport field
and a lot of shops were constructed Fix the agreement mistake
sports fields
in side
the Correct your spelling
inside
river
. The final addition was a large lake of
Change preposition
on
south
end of the Add an article
the south
river
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