The map below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The map below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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The map illustrates changes that occurred in the town of Willington in the years 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the village became more residential and commercial including new
homes
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, roads, a bridge,
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and shops
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shops
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and shops
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. villages, sports
field
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fields
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, and expanded areas for
wetland
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wetlands
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for birds.
In addition
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, the
river
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remained unchanged. Looking at the map in more detail, there were only 100
homes
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in Willington and the west was occupied by farms in 1780. The
river
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ran from north to south along the long side of the town, a feature that was unaltered by 2000. In the year 1860, some farms had been removed to give way to a road leading from the
river
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to a village that had doubled in size (200
homes
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) in the North.
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, there was
also
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the appearance of a bridge over the
river
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. In 2000, the number of
homes
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had a
significantly
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rise, to 500
homes
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and the farm and forest were completely destroyed. They were replaced by two schools, three
sport field
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sports fields
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and a lot of shops were constructed
in side
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inside
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the
river
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. The final addition was a large lake
of
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on
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south
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the south
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end of the
river
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Vocabulary: Replace the words homes, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • changes
  • occurred
  • 1780
  • 1860
  • 2000
  • map
  • show
  • named
  • Willington
  • introduction
  • overview
  • comparison
  • conclusion
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