The given bar chart illustrates how many male and female played six different sports in English city during 2012.
The bar chart demonstrates the number of participants who took part in six different
sports
in one of the cities located in Britain throughout 2012 broken down into females and males.
Overall
, male participants were overwhelmed by female players
in sports
such
as badminton, and swimming. Other than those, the roles were reversed as the number of male players
had taken over in tennis, cycling, football and hockey,
Looking at the bar chart for more detail, regarding tennis, cycling, and hockey players
, they shared a whopping 10 to 15 % difference when comparing the number of men and women respectively. More surprisingly, the similarity also
appeared in sports
that women had taken over such
as badminton, and swimming. Furthermore
, football was overly dominated by male members as not only it was the vast majority of male players
but also
it was 3 times compared to female members.
On top of that, when comparing the total numbers of players
, all 5 kinds of sports
were taken by storms compared to hockey players
whereas
it only took nearly 15 % in males and 10 % in females.Submitted by maituanorange on
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