The chart shows the main reasons for study among students of different age group.

The chart shows the main reasons for study among students of different age group.
Containing in the bar chart is data pertaining to the primary purposes of study among learners of various
age
groups.
Overall
, it can be seen that students
chosen
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to study for
career
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more than for
interest
with the exception of
people
aged 40 or over.
Additionally
, the younger showed a preference to learn for
career
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,
while
the older
age
group was more interested in studying for
interest
. Looking at the data more closely, it can be observed that over 60% of
people
aged under 16 to 29 studied for
career
,
whereas
the figures for the same
age
group were much lower ranging from 10% to 15% for
interest
, making
this
the most significant difference.
Similarly
, the percentage of
people
learning for
career
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in the 30 and 89
age
group was higher than
interest
at just under 60% and approximately 25%, respectively. Moving onto the remaining data,
people
aged 49 or over were more in favour of the studying reason for
interest
at exactly 70% than
career
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at roughly 19%. Regarding
people
aged between 40 and 49, their main purposes accounted for a similar proportion, at just over 41%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, career, interest, people with synonyms.
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