Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

Hello Mr Brian Knock, I
leave
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in the Santana neighbourhood and I am writing
this
letter to detail my situation and the situation of many
people
who live here. We have here in
this
neighbourhood
a
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an
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old building that
are
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is
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bring
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bad
sitution
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situation
for all neighbours and we want to report it to your newspaper for who knows someone in prefecture city could help us.
Current
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condition of the building it's disgusting, it's
a
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an
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old building that
are
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falling
a part
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apart
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, literally many parts of the building
such
as the roof,
parts
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and parts
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of the walls are crumbling and of course it's dangerous for many
people
who
walking
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by the street even more since the building's street it's the main street of the neighbourhood. I think in
this
case have
to
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options for
this
building, one of them
it's
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is to
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rebuild or
reforming
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and give some viability for
this
building
such
as a store, supermarket or a house for
people
living there. The second option
it's
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is to
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demolish the building and build some new from the ground. I will appreciate
if
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you give attention to
this
subject for who knows
prefect
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perfect
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people
could
listening
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us and resolve
all
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this
matter as soon as possible
for
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so as
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not
cause
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to cause
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any more trouble. Best regards.
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coherence cohesion
Provide more specific and relevant details about the building and its condition.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate formal greetings and closings in a letter to a newspaper editor.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and provides supporting details.
task achievement
Expand your response to fully address the prompt and provide more specific suggestions for action.
task achievement
Use a more formal and professional tone in your writing.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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