Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation
Hello Mr Brian Knock,
I
leave
in the Santana neighbourhood and I am writing Correct your spelling
live
this
letter to detail my situation and the situation of many people
who live here. We have here in this
neighbourhood a
old building that Change the article
an
are
Change the verb form
is
bring
bad Wrong verb form
bringing
sitution
for all neighbours and we want to report it to your newspaper for who knows someone in prefecture city could help us.
Correct your spelling
situation
Current
condition of the building it's disgusting, it's Add an article
The current
a
old building that Change the article
an
are
falling Change the verb form
is
a part
, literally many parts of the building Correct your spelling
apart
such
as the roof, parts
of the walls are crumbling and of course it's dangerous for many Correct word choice
and parts
people
who walking
by the street even more since the building's street it's the main street of the neighbourhood.
I think in Change the form of the verb
walk
this
case have to
options for Correct your spelling
two
this
building, one of them it's
rebuild or Wrong verb form
is to
reforming
and give some viability for Wrong verb form
reform
this
building such
as a store, supermarket or a house for people
living there. The second option it's
demolish the building and build some new from the ground.
I will appreciate Wrong verb form
is to
if
you give attention to Correct pronoun usage
it if
this
subject for who knows prefect
Correct your spelling
perfect
people
could listening
us and resolve Wrong verb form
listen to
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
this
matter as soon as possible for
not Change preposition
so as
cause
any more trouble.
Best regards.Fix the infinitive
to cause
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coherence cohesion
Provide more specific and relevant details about the building and its condition.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate formal greetings and closings in a letter to a newspaper editor.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and provides supporting details.
task achievement
Expand your response to fully address the prompt and provide more specific suggestions for action.
task achievement
Use a more formal and professional tone in your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
