Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standard on earth. do you agree or this agre

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amount of money is used to discover
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have never seen before . In the opposite view, people said that using
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spending to develop their life facilities is more suitable . I agree with the first opinion and there are
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supporting my point On the
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is too massive for us to gain all of
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will be destroyed and
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work that we can do to prevent that bad circumstance
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more research and gain more experience
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a race to invent
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spaceships
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for their
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citizens
against disasters like
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or
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meteor
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many warnings about destructive
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are given
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, children must be educated to have more
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. When they
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young, it was very easy to teach them something and
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a suitable time for us to do that. Using more expenditure on universe education can bring
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young people effective wisdom helping them later.
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.After they
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, they can be
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engineer to improve their countries In conclusion , exploring
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is very
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human
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planet.
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some day
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, the
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will be destroyed by something and knowledge about
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will help us
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coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas in a logical manner and structuring your essay properly with an introduction and conclusion.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and precise language to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity and coherence.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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