The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph below illustrates the median of everyday maximum and minimum mercury in degrees
celsius
, Capitalize word
Celsius
while
the chart gives information about the average amount of rainfall
in 12 months for Brisbane
and Canberra
.
Overall
, it clearly shows the highest temperature in Brisbane
occurs in February along with
the rainfall
ratio, as well as
for the heat in Canberra
, it happened in February too, while
the rainfall
mostly came about between June and August.
To begin
with, the beginning of the year can be said as the hottest weather in Brisbane
. This
can be looked at as in January the temperature started with
28 Change preposition
at
celsius
, touching 30 Capitalize word
Celsius
celsius
in February. The Capitalize word
Celsius
rainfall
also
dominates between January to March, almost 2 weeks of each month. Canberra
itself has similarity
with Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
Brisbane
in degree, yet the rainfall
is not frequent, only
7 - 8 days rain wetting Change preposition
with only
Canberra
in the first quarter of the year.
Starting winter, from May to August, the temperatures are at their lowest both in Brisbane
and Canberra
. However
, in Canberra
, rain often falls between June and August, about 10 days per month.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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