The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph below illustrates the median of everyday maximum and minimum mercury in degrees
celsius
Capitalize word
Celsius
show examples
,
while
the chart gives information about the average amount of
rainfall
in 12 months for
Brisbane
and
Canberra
.
Overall
, it clearly shows the highest temperature in
Brisbane
occurs in February
along with
the
rainfall
ratio,
as well as
for the heat in
Canberra
, it happened in February too,
while
the
rainfall
mostly came about between June and August.
To begin
with, the beginning of the year can be said as the hottest weather in
Brisbane
.
This
can be looked at as in January the temperature started
with
Change preposition
at
show examples
28
celsius
Capitalize word
Celsius
show examples
, touching 30
celsius
Capitalize word
Celsius
show examples
in February. The
rainfall
also
dominates between January to March, almost 2 weeks of each month.
Canberra
itself has
similarity
Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
show examples
with
Brisbane
in degree, yet the
rainfall
is not frequent,
only
Change preposition
with only
show examples
7 - 8 days rain wetting
Canberra
in the first quarter of the year. Starting winter, from May to August, the temperatures are at their lowest both in
Brisbane
and
Canberra
.
However
, in
Canberra
, rain often falls between June and August, about 10 days per month.
Submitted by zefanyagyu on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, brisbane, canberra with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average daily maximum
  • average daily minimum
  • rainfall
  • degrees Celsius (°C)
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • geographic location
  • climate zones
  • seasonal changes
  • data representation
  • comparison
  • temperature range
  • weather patterns
  • statistical analysis
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!