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The maps show the changes of Nelson city between 2000 and now.

The maps show the changes of Nelson city between 2000 and now.
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The maps give information about Nelson
City
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's transformation in 2000 and recently.
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, plenty of changes happened on both sides of the
city
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centre
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, where the port remained in the South and the university stood still in the North. There are two replaced places and three additional buildings in the Southern part of the Nelson
city
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centre
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. The old market is renovated into a new shop,
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 the road usage that was previously dedicated for vehicles to pedestrians.
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, there is a restaurant in the Southwest of the municipal,
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 bars and clubs in the opposite direction. Across the Southeastern place, a new covered market lies just beside the middle of the municipal.
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the
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in the
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 North of the
city
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centre
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, a new train station situated just in front of the campus is moved from the Western part of the municipal. Hall of residence and new shopping
centre
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 near the university.
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, a tramline is installed across the train station and the educational institution currently and a bike rental scheme is placed inside the
city
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centre
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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