The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first line graph compares the amount of families with their electrical usage,
while
the second one shows how much time each household per week doing housework over a
period
of 99 years.
Overall
, the usage of electrical devices from 1920 until 2019 had an increasing
trend
,
whereas
the total hours of housework during a week had a decreasing
trend
until the end of the
period
. As shown in the first line graph, the initiation percentage of using washing machines and vacuum cleaners was larger than that of refrigerators (40%, 30%, and 3% respectively).
Moreover
, their positions reversed and the percentage of using refrigerators and vacuum cleaners overtook that of washing machines.
Also
, the proportion of using refrigerators experienced a significant rise until 1980 and reached 100%.
However
, it remained stable until the end of the
period
,
while
that of vacuum cleaners had an increasing
trend
until 2000 and remained static until 2019.
In addition
, despite all fluctuations the percentage of using washing machines had a growing
trend
and reached 75% in 2019.
According to
the second line graph, the amount of housework hours experienced a dramatic decline from 1920 until 1960 and became 30% lower (20%). From 1960 to 2019 the hours fluctuated and reached about 10% (11%)
at the end
of the
period
.
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