The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The given pictures show the transformation of a park from 1980 until now.
Overall
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it is clear that
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this
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public garden has become a location which is appropriate for both the elderly and the young. There have been many new facilities added
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as a playground and a barbecue area. On the left of the maps, the zone included a pond, benches and flowers in 1980 which relatively remained unchanged except for flowers replaced by the bush area.
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, two gates have been removed and there have been more roads leading to
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public garden than there were in 1980. The expansion of roads has made the park suitable for containing more walkers. On the right of the pictures, in 1980 there were only trees on the top, but now there have been several party facilities
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as chairs, desks and barbecue.
This
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alteration indicated that
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park owner has changed it to turn it into an attractive place for all ages. To the bottom of the barbecue zone, the flowers have been demolished paving the way for a new yard for children.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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