The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of different types of accommocation in London during the same two periods.

The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and 2010s, and the availability of different types of accommocation in London during the same two periods.
The pie chart and the figures illustrate the types of living accommodation occupied during the first 20 years in London between 1990 and 2010 and the availability of different types of accommodation there over periods of 20 years.
Overall
, the proportion of
people
living with parents and a house (shared) is the largest. And, the proportion of
people
living in house (alone) and flat (alone) is the lowest.
Besides
that,
houses
and
flats
with 3-4 bedrooms still remain steady but 1-2 bedrooms
houses
and
flats
are significantly reduced. It can be seen from the pie chart that the number of
people
living in
flats
doubled between 1990 and 2010 and
houses
(shared)
also
rose but not too much.
Next,
the number of
people
living with parents, in a house (alone) and flat (alone) fell by more than half. From the statistics, it can be inferred that 1-2 bedroom
houses
in 1990 decreased three times compared to 2010 from 34,000 to 12,000,
also
for 1-2 bedroom
flats
decreased from 32,000 to 10,000.
In addition
, 3-4 4-bedroom
houses
remained stable from the 1990s to the 2010s without increasing from 47,000 to 48,500.
Finally
, 3-4 bedroom
flats
in 2010 onwards reduced rapidly compared to the 1990s, by 7.000.
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