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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

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The
pressure
 kids are getting, is at its peak. With kids having daily social media exposure at
such
 a young age, it is brainwashing them to all unrealistic
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. They start to compare themselves with the people they see online; models with perfect bodies, extremely gifted people showing off their achievements,
as well as
 content on how perfect life should be. As the years continue by,
school's
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 curriculum
also
 gets harder. Teachers and parents have high
expectation
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 that their kids need to fulfill. Yet, some of them don't really understand how much extra weight
it
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is put on
children
 and could result in them being too saturated. Trying to blend in
society
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 is already a big
pressure
 for
children
. There are so many unwritten rules that
children
 feel
the
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they
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neeed
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need
 to keep up with. All
these
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pressure
 ends up creating a domino effect.
Children
 could start having less confidence and
this
 could lead to the decline of their social skills. Parents or guardians in charge of their
children
 should
elleviate
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alleviate
elevate
 their expectations and decrease the amount of screen time
children
 are getting. Because if the
pressure
children
 get keeps on increasing, it could result in many negative outcomes.
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