The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june

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The line graph demonstrates the request for

information

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at a tourist office in the United Kingdom for the first six months of the given year.

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it is clear that

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in-person requests increased from least to most common over the period,

besides

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the telephone which

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went up. Meanwhile,

information

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requested by letter/email was dramatically reduced through 6 months. In the beginning, in-person

information

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requests were the lowest of all three categories at approximately 420. It went up smoothly to the end and reached a peak of 1850. In comparison with the way before, the telephone was the most popular in January at about 850.

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the

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collected by telephone tended to fall slightly in the next month, it maintained the jumped trend. In the end, it rose to 1600.

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with the two categories above, the written requests sharply decreased over the period. In January, it was in the second position with 790. After that, it dropped to the lowest point at about 390. There was

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fluctuated

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till the end.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june

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