The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june

The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june
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The line graph demonstrates the request for
information
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at a tourist office in the United Kingdom for the first six months of the given year.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in-person requests increased from least to most common over the period,
besides
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the telephone which
also
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went up. Meanwhile,
information
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requested by letter/email was dramatically reduced through 6 months. In the beginning, in-person
information
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requests were the lowest of all three categories at approximately 420. It went up smoothly to the end and reached a peak of 1850. In comparison with the way before, the telephone was the most popular in January at about 850.
Although
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the
information
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collected by telephone tended to fall slightly in the next month, it maintained the jumped trend. In the end, it rose to 1600.
In contrast
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with the two categories above, the written requests sharply decreased over the period. In January, it was in the second position with 790. After that, it dropped to the lowest point at about 390. There was
not
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no
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fluctuated
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till the end.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words information with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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