You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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Dear Pat, Thank you for inviting me for the weekend and honestly It was a blast. I safely reached my home and when I looked at the upcoming week, I realized I left my jacket at your place as next week is filled with snow.
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, I've not just forgotten my coat there but I've missed some of my essential things like AirPods, wallet, and some receipts in my black leather jacket's pockets. I'm
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a stupid. By the way, the jacket must be in the coat closet and it has my name tag on it. Jacob is coming to your city next week. Can you be able to just hand over my wallet and Airpods? Sorry for the inconvenience. Or if you can mail all these items to me, it'd be great and I'll repay you with Diet Coke. Anyway, it was a pleasure to see you
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and let's catch up next month on my birthday. Best Wishes, Grishma
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task response
Make sure to clearly address all the points mentioned in the prompt. In this case, you have explained that you left your coat at your friend's house and mentioned the description and the items in the pockets.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your ideas flow logically from one paragraph to another. Consider organizing your ideas more clearly and using transitional phrases to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to make your writing more varied and interesting. Consider using synonyms and more specific vocabulary to enhance your lexical resource.
grammatical range
Pay attention to the accuracy of your grammar and sentence structures. Review your writing for any errors or awkward phrasing.
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