Some pro say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the perception of certain individuals,

extinction

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the extinction

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of specific

species

of

animals

and

plants

is the major environmental challenge

currently

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. Others assert that

,

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apply

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there are more significant environmental issues.

This

essay concurs with the former viewpoint because some

plants

and

animals

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animal

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species

play a key role in maintaining a balanced

ecosystem

,

however

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however,

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both views will be discussed. On the one hand,

air

pollution is an existing factor which endangers our environment.

Emmissions

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Emissions

from industries, vehicles, and other human activities

such

as smoking cigarettes lead to poor

air

quality,

where as

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which

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causes respiratory diseases when inhaled,

however

, I think

air

pollution is not the most serious environmental factor we are facing today since measures are being put in place by the government to curb it.

Conversely

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on the other hand

,

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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animal

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species

lead

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leads

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to a disruption in the

ecosystem

.

This

can impact food webs, ecological relationships and the functioning of the

ecosystem

.

Furthermore

,

this

disruption can affect the availability of resources and vital services provided by the

ecosystem

.

For instance

, if lions become extinct, the

species

it used to prey on

such

as

deers

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deer

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become

over abundance

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overabundant

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and can lead to overgrazing which may alter the balance of the earth's

ecosystem

. Since humans depend on a

well balanced

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well-balanced

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ecosystem

to provide them with necessary resources like clean

air

,

fresh water

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freshwater

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, and medicine, I think protecting

plants

and

animals

should be an utmost priority. In conclusion, even though

air

pollution affects our environment, I think

protection

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the protection

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of

plants

and

animals

should be given more attention since it will destroy the balance of the

ecosystem

.