Some people say that the main environmental problem our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the perception of certain individuals,

extinction

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the extinction

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of specific

species

of

plants

and animals is the major environmental

challenges

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challenge

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currently

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apply

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. Others assert that there are more significant environmental issues.

This

essay agrees with the former

view point

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viewpoint

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because some

plants

and animal

species

play a key role in maintaining a balanced

ecosystem

,

however

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however,

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both views will be discussed. On the one hand,

air

pollution is an existing factor which endangers our environment.

Emmissions

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Emissions

from industries, vehicles and other human activities

such

as smoking cigarettes lead to poor

air

quality,

where as

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whereas

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when inhaled causes respiratory diseases

however

, I believe

air

pollution is not the most serious environmental problem we are facing today since measures are already being put in place by the government to curb it.

Conversely

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on the other hand

,

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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animal

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species

lead

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leads

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to a disruption in the

ecosystem

.

This

can affect food webs, ecological relationships and the functioning of the ecosystems.

Furthermore

,

this

disruption can affect the availability of resources and vital services provided by the

ecosystem

.

For

instance

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if lions become extinct, the

species

it used to prey on

such

as deers become

over abundance

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overabundant

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and leads to overgrazing, which may alter the the balance of the earth's

ecosystem

. Humans depend on a

well balanced

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well-balanced

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ecosystem

to provide them with necessary resources like clean

air

, fresh water and medicine,

therefore

I think

protection

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the protection

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of

plants

and animal

species

should be an utmost priority. In conclusion, even though

air

pollution affects our environment, I think protecting

plants

and animal

species

should be given more attention since it significantly destroys the balance of the

ecosystem

.