A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend

Hello Naveen, Hopefully, you and your family are in great spirits! My apologies for not being in touch.I am writing

this

in response to your email , providing some suggestions for your upcoming camping . I believe, that you will surely enjoy the camping night, where you experience the cool breeze in the Hill stations.Apparently, if the sky is clear you will be enough lucky to star gaze.

However

, during the nights you have to be extra cautious .You might encounter Wild habitats like Bears .In that case, don't panic just make some loud noises.Be careful

while

you are out of your tent, as a plethora of vicious insects will be out of their nest during nights in summer. If you are planning

this

event in the month of May I can find some time to accompany you .Do get back to me whenever you get a chance. Best Regards, Vicky .

Submitted by vicky.kallem on Wed Nov 01 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

152 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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