A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend

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Hello Naveen, Hopefully, you and your family are in great spirits! My apologies for not being in touch.I am writing
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in response to your email , providing some suggestions for your upcoming camping . I believe, that you will surely enjoy the camping night, where you experience the cool breeze in the Hill stations.Apparently, if the sky is clear you will be enough lucky to star gaze.
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, during the nights you have to be extra cautious .You might encounter Wild habitats like Bears .In that case, don't panic just make some loud noises.Be careful
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you are out of your tent, as a plethora of vicious insects will be out of their nest during nights in summer. If you are planning
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event in the month of May I can find some time to accompany you .Do get back to me whenever you get a chance. Best Regards, Vicky .
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