The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which storage
area
are created from Fix the agreement mistake
areas
the
some special material concrete Remove the article
apply
canvas
.
Overall
, the process consist
of eight stages, beginning with the manufacturing and ending up with the Change the verb form
consists
products
Fix the agreement mistake
product
storing
.
First of all, fibrous surface, dry concrete and waterproof layer Replace the word
storage
collected
to serve as concrete Add a missing verb
are collected
canvas
and bring
together for manufacturing. After that, Wrong verb form
brought
products
are putting
into the truck and ready for Wrong verb form
put
delivering
. At the next stage, the materials arrived Replace the word
delivery
to
a place and Change preposition
at
dropped
. Add a missing verb
were dropped
Lastly
, wrapped products
opened it up from cargo.
In the next stage, result
of the journey of materials spread on the ground using Add an article
the result
a result
with
pegs which Change preposition
apply
is
10 meters long. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
While
doing this
rope is used from a truck. Following
this
, canvas
connected to a door and then
Correct article usage
an airpump
airpump
gave the air to make it Correct your spelling
air pump
bigger
size. Add an article
a bigger
Subsequently
, canvas
material watered
with the eight meters long door completed.
After that, the stage Add a missing verb
was watered
of
setting took 20-24 hours. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, the products
are ready to
storage in the concrete Change preposition
for
canvas
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canvas, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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