The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram explains the way in which storage

area

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are created from

the

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some special material concrete

canvas

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.

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, the process

consist

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of eight stages, beginning with the manufacturing and ending up with the

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products

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product

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storing

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storage

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. First of all, fibrous surface, dry concrete and waterproof layer

collected

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to serve as concrete

canvas

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and

bring

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together for manufacturing. After that,

products

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are

putting

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into the truck and ready for

delivering

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. At the next stage, the materials arrived

to

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a place and

dropped

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.

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, wrapped

products

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opened it up from cargo. In the next stage,

result

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the result

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of the journey of materials spread on the ground using

with

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apply

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pegs which

is

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10 meters long.

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doing

this

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rope is used from a truck.

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this

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,

canvas

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connected to a door and

then

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an airpump

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airpump

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air pump

gave the air to make it

bigger

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size.

Subsequently

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,

canvas

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material

watered

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with the eight meters long door completed. After that, the stage

of

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setting took 20-24 hours.

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, the

products

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are ready

to

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storage in the concrete

canvas

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.