Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In contemporary
society
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society,
languages
play an important role to exchange
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in exchanging
the
feelings and ideas Correct article usage
apply
each
other. Speaking a non-native Change preposition
with each
language
could be caused to generate a number of despites as social or practical. I strongly disagree with the given statement. In this
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discuss what are the negative and positive Wrong verb form
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impact
of them.
On the one hand, Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
languages
are essential to express our ideas. especially live
in a foreign country. Wrong verb form
living
Acordingly
people have to adapt to that particular environment as required. For Correct your spelling
Accordingly
instant
, countries like Japan, Replace the word
instance
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and China
China
give Correct word choice
and China
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apply
their
priority Correct pronoun usage
apply
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to
for
their native Change preposition
to
language
. Therefore
, foreigners, tourist
or other Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
straingers
have to behave Correct your spelling
strangers
fulfilling
the said requirement. Change preposition
in fulfilling
Hence
, people are studying the
foreign Correct article usage
apply
languages
before move
to Change the verb form
moving
those kind
of countries. It helps them to reduce their social, environmental and Change the determiner
that kind
those kinds
economical
issues.
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economic
On the other hand
, if persons
are not keen Replace the word
people
about
handling Change preposition
on
the
non-native Correct article usage
apply
languages
, there are several technical aids can
be used to reduce the bothering. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
, due to
the advancement of technology, there are several applications has
been developed to assist the people who need aids. Correct subject-verb agreement
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Further
, those mobile applications always
possible to translate Add a missing verb
are always
language
texts, photographs, voice recordings or live speaking. According to
that if
may cause to reduce arising problems.
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To conclude
, even though there is a language
dispite
in the foreign countries, there are various option can be used to avoid the problems. Correct your spelling
despite
dispute
Thus
, I believe that living away from the mother land
does not cause to generate social and practical problems because there are more solutions Correct your spelling
motherland
are
available to reduce or stop them. Unnecessary verb
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