The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of employees of two genders in seven different departments at a university.
Overall
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it is clear that
male workers are more than half of all genres of faculty, and the most noticeable data that can be viewed is on engineering, which peaks at 82%.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the arts and education fields are dominated by female staff. There are around 15% more in the arts, Linking Words
while
there are three times more in education. Linking Words
Moreover
, in business, law, and science departments, the proportion of male workers is higher than that of female workers. Linking Words
By contrast
, males are almost two times higher than females in business and approximately 20% more in both law and science fields. Linking Words
In addition
, the employee percentage in engineering faculty has the most significant margin, Linking Words
while
there is nearly no difference in medicine faculty.Linking Words
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