The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.
The table depicts the
countries
where
petrol
is
more
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most
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expensive in the World. It
also
provides additional financial
informations
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information
pieces of information
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such
as the GDP per capita and average
income
in these
countries
.
Overall
, it is shown that not in every country the price of gasoline is balanced with one's
income
.
However
, the Average Monthly
Petrol
Expenditure is more or less the same
on
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in
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the nations under consideration. In
countries
such
as Norway or Belgium where monthly incomes are higher (respectively around 4329$ and 3125$), the percentage of that
income
spent on gasoline is quite low; 7,40% in Norway and 8,70% in Belgium. We cannot say the same for poorer
countries
,
for
instance
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Eritrea where 61.10% of
a
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the
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monthly salary is spent on
petrol
. 122 At the same time, it seems like the average disposable
income
does not affect the monthly
petrol
expenditure because it remains pretty equal even in poorer
countries
.
For instance
, Norway spends around 319$ and Turkey (with a 924.64$ GDP) uses around the same amount, more specifically 315$.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, petrol, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • petrol
  • expensive
  • countries
  • financial information
  • average
  • prices
  • GDP per capita
  • income
  • data
  • currency
  • fluctuate
  • factors
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
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