In some countries, buying a car rather than renting one is very important for people.   Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, buying a

car

is much more important than renting

one

in some countries.

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essay will examine the causes

as well as

evaluating

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this

situation. There are a variety of different causes for

this

case.

To begin

with, cars are the main

transports

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in almost every western

countries

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so buying a

car

will bring out more amenities for people. If you have your own

car

, you can easily control your daily routine.

For example

, you have 2 courses at 7.00 AM and your

renting

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car

is taken back for some

reasons

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and you have to walk to school or use

transportation

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app which is really annoying and

unconsistent

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inconsistent

.

Secondly

, buying a

car

is more adorable than renting

one

. With your own

car

, you just have to pay for the

car

itself and some kind of taxes which is kinda low but with renting a

car

, there are many things that make

you're

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worried about like the protection of the

car

like it's not your

car

so you can't decide about it and have to have

responsibility

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a responsibility

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to take care of the thing that

don't

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belong to you which makes no sense. In my opinion, the

values

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of having your own

car

outweigh

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the

values

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of renting

one

so it is a positive situation.

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first benefit that we can easily see is the freedom that we get from owning a

car

like

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you don't have to

worried

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about

transporting

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when you have

a

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unscheduled appointment or you want to have a trip at

weekend

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. A second benefit is for the government. When everyone has their own

car

, the government can adjust and control the population of

transports

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more effectively.

For example

, if cars become a usual thing that everyone

does have

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, there are multi

transporting

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company

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companies

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will close down which is really supportive for the government because it reduces the number of

transports

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. In conclusion, there are several

of

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logical reasons

for

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why buying a

car

is more important than renting

one

. Despite

of

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a few drawbacks, I believe that

this

situation

bring

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out more positive effects for the world.