Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given map illustrates the development in
Chorleywood
village
from 1868 until 1994.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most predominant changes were done from 1970 to 1994 with the expansion of Chorleywood
Park and Golf course.
For starters, Chorleywood
started as a single piece of land with a main road that crossed over the village
in 1868. Then
, in 1883 the land was expanded and the Chorleywood
station was created in which over the following years (1909) a railway
was added. This
railway
passed through the main road and the station from the east to the west side of the village
.
Furthermore
, there was a bigger expansion in the south part of the town from 1922 and 1970, ending with a motorway on the north-west side of the village
. This
railway
united the main road and the railway
. Finally
, the ultimate changes were made in the last
decade of the 19th century.Submitted by lily.pdr15 on
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