The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The map illustrates an industrial zone in N at

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time

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and proposed changes for

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of

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area

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, We can see that the industrial zone has completely changed into a residential district.

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, some new facilities have been constructed

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the proposed plan which led to the

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's development. The most noticeable change is that there will be no factories in the

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anymore and they will all be demolished.

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new houses will be built alongside the main street,

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building new streets around the square.

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, new facilities like

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and

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will be built for the residents of the

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new shops and medical

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times of need. It is notable that, the residential region will be expanded opposite the river.

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will be achieved by constructing a bridge over the stream and creating new accommodation opposite the river.