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43.The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

43.The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table displays information about the variation of
carbon
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production
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 in Nigeria, Algeria, Congo and Botswana between 1995 and 1999.
Overall
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, Nigeria had the highest
production
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 of
carbon
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 per day,
while
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 Algeria had the least. The other significant feature of the graph is that Congo’s and Botswana’s amount of
production
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 decreased over the
years
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. Nigeria produced 2,000,000 kilograms of
carbon
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 per day in 1995, in the next
year
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, it increased moderately by 100,000kg to 2,100,000kg, but in 1997 it dropped by 200,000kg. In 1998 it grew to 2,200,000kg and in the
last
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year
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, it climbed to 2,300,000kg maintaining its position of the highest
carbon
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production
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. Algeria started producing 40,000kg of
carbon
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 in 1997, in the second
year
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 it went down to 15,000kg and ended the
period
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 with 50,000kg, being the country with the least
carbon
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production
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. Congo started the
period
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 by producing 270,000kg of
carbon
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 dioxide, during the next
years
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, the amount of
carbon
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 decreased, in 1996 it fell by 20,000kg, in the next
year
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 it decreased slightly to 230,000, and in the
last
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 two
years
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, it continued falling to 210,000kg and 100,000 in 1998 and 1999 respectively. Botswana fluctuated significantly, it started the
period
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 with 210,000
kg
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 of
carbon
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production
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,
then
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 it went down dramatically to 7,000, during the next three
years
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 it climbed steadily, in 1997 it had 15,000kg
production
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, in 1998 40,000kg and ended the
period
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 with 75,000kg.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, production, years, year, kg, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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