45.The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

45.The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table displays information about how individuals in developing countries used their phones between 2006 and 2010.
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, almost everyone uses their mobile phone for making calls, the next more popular feature is to send and receive text messages. The other significant feature of the table is that recording videos and searching on the Internet started later than the others. In the
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2006 and 2008, 100% of
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used their phones for making calls, in 2010 it decreased by 1%.
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sending and receiving text messages increased steadily over the
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, in 2006 it had 73% of individuals using it for
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cause, which increased by 2% in the next 2
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and ended the period with 79% of
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using it for
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cause. Only 66% of
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in 2006 used their phones for taking photos,
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grew to 71% and 76% in 2008 and 2010 respectively. Playing games rose significantly during the 4
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, from only 17% in the first year to 42% in 2008, the percentage in 2010 was 1% less than the percentage in 2008.
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started to search on the Internet and record videos in 2008, starting with a proportion of 41% and 9% respectively, and both increased by approximately 30%, to 73% and 35% in 2010.
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