The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Most metropolitan countries are facing two main problems ;

transportation

and

traffic

jams

.

Therefore

, some

people

believe that the most effective way to deal with

this

condition is to persuade

people

to live in rural areas rather than in the cities.

However

, in

this

essay, I will elaborate

why

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I tend to disagree with the statement.

To begin

with, we cannot deny the fact that cities offer a lot more

opportunity

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opportunities

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than in the countryside, causing numerous

people

to migrate, and making the

population

overload.

This

situation pushes

the

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traffic

jams

and

transportation

challenges, especially

most

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since most

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people

choosing

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to have their own car.

For instance

in

Indonesia

, based on a survey conducted by the Ministry of

Transportation

, 90% of Indonesian households own more than 1 vehicle in their house.

Thus

,

this

is proof that it is not undeniable why

Indonesia

is facing a serious problem

of

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transportation

, just imagine if the

population

of 1

city

is about 11 million, and everyone has their own car,

everyday

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in the street there must be 11 million of

transportation

, excluding the public

transportation

.

On the other hand

, the government of the country has to start recommending their society to live in rural areas, or at least to move to the countryside to reduce

this

matter of

transportation

since life in cities has been too crowded.

Village

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population

is quieter, so it is totally ideal.

Moreover

, changing the capital

city

of the country can be the one solution.

For example

, the Indonesian government has a plan

in

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2024 to change Jakarta, which has been the capital

city

of

Indonesia

to Kalimantan. Kalimantan is an area in the west, far enough from Jakarta, and one of the rustic areas in

Indonesia

.

As a result

, the

population

who stay in Jakarta will lower to 5 million

people

, and the

traffic

jams

issue will decrease to 30%. In conclusion, encouraging society to still live in the

city

is not the best option for

traffic

jams

and

transportation

matters.

Additionally

, there must be an equality to transfer

population

to the countryside, so that

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transportation

will not be a serious trouble for the nation.