Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? You should give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge to support your response.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Many believe that studying
English
Use synonyms
in school is more relevant than studying other
languages
Use synonyms
. Not teaching local
languages
Use synonyms
could make them disappear for good. In my opinion, I consider that learning
English
Use synonyms
is very important and it should be taught since first grade,
along with
Linking Words
the local
language
Use synonyms
since it is the native
language
Use synonyms
of students, representing where they come from.
English
Use synonyms
is an extremely common
language
Use synonyms
being taught in almost every school in every country in the world. Some might say that it is a universal
language
Use synonyms
since everybody knows at least some of the basics. Given the fact that it is a well-known
language
Use synonyms
, it is
also
Linking Words
spoken in first-world countries
such
Linking Words
as The United States, United Kingdom, and Australia, among others, so having the opportunity to learn it and speak fluently will surely open a lot of doors in terms of work-related matters,
as well as
Linking Words
education in lots of fields
such
Linking Words
as medicine, engineering, laws, marketing, etc. People who have a different
language
Use synonyms
as
Change preposition
than
show examples
their mother tongue usually tend to work hard, study
English
Use synonyms
and immigrate to
English
Use synonyms
-speaking countries to get a better life in different aspects.
For example
Linking Words
, CNN recently published an article about the rates of emigration from Latin American people to the US going from 35% in 2010 to 55% in the year 2022, regardless of their occupation. In spite of all of
this
Linking Words
, I strongly believe that local
languages
Use synonyms
should
also
Linking Words
be taught in schools since they represent where someone is from, their roots, culture, race and, of course, it is their means of communication.
For instance
Linking Words
, here in Ecuador, the native
language
Use synonyms
is Spanish, but there are some areas where the
language
Use synonyms
spoken is Quichua, which represents the culture of indigenous natives. In order to do that, the government of the country could make changes in the Public Education Ministry and encourage educators to set campaigns and dynamic activities that promote the importance and value of learning local
languages
Use synonyms
,
as well as
Linking Words
create laws that establish teaching schedules with the same amount of hours for both
English
Use synonyms
and local
language
Use synonyms
. In conclusion,
English
Use synonyms
is surely a very important
language
Use synonyms
to learn,
however
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
does not mean that local
languages
Use synonyms
should be left out of the education program of teaching centres. Implementing campaigns and dynamic activities will help maintain them. It is equally important to teach pupils both
Submitted by f.leyton.a on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and supports it with relevant examples or explanations.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to the use of transition words and phrases to improve the flow and coherence of the essay.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.
grammatical range
Proofread carefully to correct any grammatical errors and improve sentence structures.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: